Rate my standup comedy :)

[OdalfHilter]

I'd give you a 4/10 overall, like others have said you need to work on stage presence and image. Maybe incorporate some theatrics into your performances. A lot of good comedians tend to communicate both physically and verbally through the use of body movements or facial expressions. Another critique I'd say is that you're very average looking which semi ties in with your stage presence. I don't mean in terms of aesthetics but that you're very forgettable from a style point of view. It would be difficult to recognize you or say to someone 'Oh you know that comedian who looks like blah blah' 'You mean FemaleMiceBrah? She's funny and cute' etc.

Last critique is something that will you come to you with experience and that is your overall confidence and jokes. You tend to have slight pauses where it's either you're trying to remember your lines or you're missing the timing on the joke itself.

I see potential in the fact that if I imagine some of your jokes delivered from actual pros, they could be so much better. Your content is pretty decent already other than the stereotypical female vs men jokes, the delivery should be your key focus as it can easily turn an okay joke into a good one.

Good luck for the future and keep us posted on any progress. Will be intredasting to see how you evolve.

[InfinityThor]

Stop saying ummm.

[portamoral]

the fuk are you wearing

you look like an extra on friends

[chitkunt]

Not enough flow. Seems like when audience laughs a bit you stop instead of keeping them laughing.

[mcdojo]

i can tell youre a miscer since you dont look like you lift

also you need to learn how to dress better lol

you werent too bad for a new comic, there use to be an aesthetic as fuk miscer mattybpop that tried standup. you'd assume he'd be good since of that halo affect, but he was fking shyt.

[RippedManlet]

Not bad opie, I laughed a few times.

[myProgress]

It was entertaining. Woodwatch another/10

I don't know how to feel about the racism and the way you tear down women lol like half of the time I love it the other half I'm like she needs to stop saying that

Edit: are you sure those aren't edited laughs? Sounds fake haha good job

[HumptyBrah]

I don't know how to feel about the racism and the way you tear down women lol like half of the time I love it the other half I'm like she needs to stop saying that

lol what

[mcdojo]

lol what

Beta wk smh

[myProgress]

Beta wk smh

its just not attractive to me. Nothing to do with wk

[buffuntcay]

the fuk are you wearing

you look like an extra on friends

u got great potential i lold, but this. Change ur gettup gurl then lemme holla atchu

[SER1Al]

Cringe
Edit:
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[SwagSoSick]

5,5/10 for a female comedian

[Anorexilla]

5'6 999lbs, no thanks.

[infinityplus1]

Is one of the joke not posting a mobile link

[Dee1cuts]

Came in to watch someone fail.

Leaving pleasantly surprised.
Good transitions, funny, jokes had personal depth too them.
Would keep at it!


*not sure where the previous bottom sentence came from*

[hickorysmoked1]

Brahette, did you hear about that recent thing at the Comedy Strip where William Stephenson called that annoying ass girl a kunt, and Big Jay Oakerson stepped in the middle of her boyfriend and William, and the owner defended the hecklers and banned Big Jay for speaking out on the lack of security and how the club has gone downhill? Thoughts?

[Lightsoft]

why do you "ummm"..

Edit: you ******* strong bump ffs