My first music video ever !! free 20k reps to anyone thats check it out!

[SpliTT]

i will be repping the next 5 tomorrow

[SpliTT]

bumps

[AkaKuro]

that was surprisingly good. gjdm

[SpliTT]

thx repped

[Mudshovel]

Not really into it. But the quality is there sound wise and video wise. Good luck brah.

[DoctorKazama]

Checking out right now.

[SpliTT]

thanks guys repped

[SpliTT]

im still repping anyone who checks the song out

[Tongyo]

baby gurl how u feelin' now? fuuuuark mirin song op

[Changedmalife]

I thought I was on the first page OP, but I repped you when you made the thread, says I can't rep twice. Glad to see you are up to 20,000 views. Where in the video do you appear?

[2RDEYE]

ayyy ayyy ayyyy lmao

[SpliTT]

baby gurl how u feelin' now? fuuuuark mirin song op

I thought I was on the first page OP, but I repped you when you made the thread, says I can't rep twice. Glad to see you are up to 20,000 views. Where in the video do you appear?

ayyy ayyy ayyyy lmao

repped all of you and im the one with the long hair. thanks guys yall really helped me push to 20k

[SpliTT]

bump im still repping the ones who check out my video

[fupduckbad]

bump im still repping the ones who check out my video

Sure, in for reps

[RaceRealist]

worthless music OP



there you go, now rep me



back to real music:

[Kostej]

Checked it out, looks well-produced gjdm

[SpliTT]

will rep the next 5 tonight , on recharge rn

[SpliTT]

bumps

[Gingerbruh]

[SpliTT]

repped

[ruskiMishka]

Nice production, easy to listen to. +1

[CurlBrah1234]

sound quality is good op,

but the song itself is like 3/10 for me srs no hate though


Lyrics are super bland, nothing stands out
Material itself is bland, brb getting a new bitch (haven't heard that in rap before)
Singing from feature isn't great, kind of whining
Rapping/flow is incredibllllly basic, no personality, no character.

Overall, the song is just a massive rap cliche, like your scared to let any 'real' emotions out so you use the typical rapper front (weed, liquor, bitches)

no hate just my .02$
still upvoted

[SpliTT]

sound quality is good op,

but the song itself is like 3/10 for me srs no hate though


Lyrics are super bland, nothing stands out
Material itself is bland, brb getting a new bitch (haven't heard that in rap before)
Singing from feature isn't great, kind of whining
Rapping/flow is incredibllllly basic, no personality, no character.

Overall, the song is just a massive rap cliche, like your scared to let any 'real' emotions out so you use the typical rapper front (weed, liquor, bitches)

no hate just my .02$
still upvoted

i appreciate the 2 cents but what u mean scared to let emotions out, like how should i have done it?

[CurlBrah1234]

i appreciate the 2 cents but what u mean scared to let emotions out, like how should i have done it?

I think it could've been more raw, like you could've sounded more angry, more upset, more emotional overall - your voice sounded kinda flat
You could've divulged alot more into what she meant to you personally, what she meant to you

Most of your lines were just so cliche that it's hard to tell if you actually cared about this girl or not
"baby girl how you feeling now"
"i got a new bitch"
"i've been faking all this love I'm california bound"
"i've been smoking & rolling alot"
"drugs"

the drug & liquor mentions just seem like filler content. What do you mean "faking all this love?"



I think alot of it stems from a lack of buildup/backstory. As a listener we're never given any insight as to what's going on

Who is this girl?
What did she do?
What did you do?
Whats your past together?
etc. etc


It's hard to be invested in the song when theres no real substance/story to grab onto
and nothing that makes you stand out personally from the thousands of other rappers


not trying to nitpick u though, my thoughts may be complete bullsht (srs)

[SpliTT]

I think it could've been more raw, like you could've sounded more angry, more upset, more emotional overall - your voice sounded kinda flat
You could've divulged alot more into what she meant to you personally, what she meant to you

Most of your lines were just so cliche that it's hard to tell if you actually cared about this girl or not
"baby girl how you feeling now"
"i got a new bitch"
"i've been faking all this love I'm california bound"
"i've been smoking & rolling alot"
"drugs"

the drug & liquor mentions just seem like filler content. What do you mean "faking all this love?"



I think alot of it stems from a lack of buildup/backstory. As a listener we're never given any insight as to what's going on

Who is this girl?
What did she do?
What did you do?
Whats your past together?
etc. etc


It's hard to be invested in the song when theres no real substance/story to grab onto
and nothing that makes you stand out personally from the thousands of other rappers


not trying to nitpick u though, my thoughts may be complete bullsht (srs)

i will incorporate this in my next songs, thank u

[Ultimate Genetics]

Nice work man, I miss music like this. Too much stuff today has no message. This **** is like it was written with real feels. I think it should be longer though, felt too short.