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Thread: Working on a short story
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05-20-2024, 11:27 AM #1Registered User
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Working on a short story
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05-20-2024, 11:30 AM #2Registered User
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Where's the story?Originally Posted by TheScapeGOAT
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05-20-2024, 11:31 AM #3Registered User
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It's about him throwing noodles in his g@y lovers face.Originally Posted by Fuggettabowteet
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05-20-2024, 11:57 AM #4Registered User
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Oh, I still need to write it. That was the title I came up with and wanted some feedback.Originally Posted by Fuggettabowteet
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05-20-2024, 11:57 AM #5Registered User
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Bro, are you in the closet? Why does everything have to be gay? Just because my friends and I have food fights with lo mein doesn’t mean we are gay.Originally Posted by 300Lane1
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05-20-2024, 12:01 PM #6Welsh Brah
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You are coming at this from the wrong angle OP, "Assboys get fuked the deepest" may be a more appropriate title for you.Originally Posted by TheScapeGOAT
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05-20-2024, 12:33 PM #7Registered User
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The title is incredible
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05-20-2024, 12:35 PM #8YEAH YOU MAD
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sounds like something written by a person with the I.Q. of a rotten cabbage, so, great job, buddy
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05-20-2024, 12:45 PM #9Registered User
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^^^ Fixed it for you. #great bookOriginally Posted by TheScapeGOAT
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05-20-2024, 01:00 PM #10I love bacon.....
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Howdy....Originally Posted by TheScapeGOAT
Being a rhythm guitarist/song writer I've always gravitated to creative writing.
On your title....it makes no sense to me.
But, that's without reading the story and how you portray and/or reconcile this contradiction so the reader gets what you're trying to convey.
Creative writing isn't easy and you best have the skin of a snow tire
if you're going to upload it for all to read.
Not sure if you're truly serious but, if so, good luck with the project.
Carry on.Last edited by Wayne Evans; 05-20-2024 at 01:11 PM.
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05-20-2024, 01:12 PM #11IG Taurus46ott
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Short story huh
It must be about manlets.48 year old guy; 5'5"
if you're going to upload it for all to read.
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