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I'm trying to get this gig going and I need to get some feedback on it.
Thanks in advance
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06-10-2012, 05:28 PM #1Registered User
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Every man at some point in his life is gonna lose a battle. He’s gonna fight and he’s gonna lose. But what makes him a man, is that in the midst of that battle he does not lose himself.
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06-10-2012, 05:37 PM #2
You misspelled "finally" in the 4th sentence brah. Lol
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06-10-2012, 05:40 PM #3Registered User
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I tried fixing that but it wouldn't let me. Lol I did this all on my phone and will be on the computer tomorrowOriginally Posted by Natstokes14
Every man at some point in his life is gonna lose a battle. He’s gonna fight and he’s gonna lose. But what makes him a man, is that in the midst of that battle he does not lose himself.
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06-10-2012, 05:41 PM #4Yeah man, its not a bad article. Only critiques are some grammar mechanics and maybe make some of your language throughout the article a little bit more...professional.Originally Posted by Ryanl412
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06-10-2012, 05:43 PM #5Registered User
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OK thanks I'll check that over tomorrow...reppedOriginally Posted by Natstokes14
Every man at some point in his life is gonna lose a battle. He’s gonna fight and he’s gonna lose. But what makes him a man, is that in the midst of that battle he does not lose himself.
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06-10-2012, 05:44 PM #6Registered User
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Take the last post back. Can't rep from phone. Will rep tomorrow
Every man at some point in his life is gonna lose a battle. He’s gonna fight and he’s gonna lose. But what makes him a man, is that in the midst of that battle he does not lose himself.
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06-10-2012, 05:46 PM #7
You need to pay a little bit more on grammar and misspelled words. Try using third person. Apart from that, you have some potential OP.
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06-10-2012, 06:14 PM #8Registered User
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Every man at some point in his life is gonna lose a battle. He’s gonna fight and he’s gonna lose. But what makes him a man, is that in the midst of that battle he does not lose himself.
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