This is my Offseason

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 09:06 AM

In the works. Who would be interested in rocking this design? Simple, funny, and just in time for you winter bulkers! Also, is there anything you would want added to it? different color font? shirt color? etc.

There's a lot of "there is no offseason" shirts out there. This is why this shirt is unique. There is an offseason! It's a time for growth and development. This shirt also helps spread the idea of flexible dieting. These would be printed on American Apparel Triblend Shirts, Gildan tanks, and women's fitted tees! Let me know if you would be interested!

**TheJizzle** · 10-28-2014, 09:09 AM

Congrats on getting your pro card. Huge accomplishment! Which will be your first show as a pro? Rumour says NY Pro 2015?

**JanesLastResort** · 10-28-2014, 09:45 AM

would not buy/10

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 11:07 AM

Originally Posted by JanesLastResort

would not buy/10

anything that can improve the design?

**TTimmerman** · 10-28-2014, 11:12 AM

Gz on the pro card!! Hope you do well

**spamy** · 10-28-2014, 11:18 AM

Clean or dirty bulk?

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 11:25 AM

Originally Posted by spamy

Clean or dirty bulk?

i like it dirty

**PaLftr** · 10-28-2014, 02:16 PM

everyone's being rude, so I'll give you some honest design feedback.

Remove all text and pictures, and I'd buy the shirt.

**Jonphinguyen7** · 10-28-2014, 02:55 PM

it would be better if you didn't divide the text and had the images beneath the statement. It's easier to read and keeps the design clean. I don't like the color of the shirt and the font being two colors. The text color should be opposite the shirt color. (Blue and Orange is the hot thing). I think it would be funnier if the picture were less "Microsoft clipart" and had more personality. Just providing constructive feedback. Nice Work

EXAMPLE:

This is my offseason
(Ice Cream) (Pizza) (Cake) (Etc)

**jamiesays** · 10-28-2014, 03:04 PM

Originally Posted by emanfitness

anything that can improve the design?

hire a designer.

also, guy above me has solid advice

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 03:32 PM

Originally Posted by jamiesays

hire a designer.

also, guy above me has solid advice

Alright, thanks for the feedback!

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 03:32 PM

Originally Posted by Jonphinguyen7

it would be better if you didn't divide the text and had the images beneath the statement. It's easier to read and keeps the design clean. I don't like the color of the shirt and the font being two colors. The text color should be opposite the shirt color. (Blue and Orange is the hot thing). I think it would be funnier if the picture were less "Microsoft clipart" and had more personality. Just providing constructive feedback. Nice Work

EXAMPLE:

This is my offseason
(Ice Cream) (Pizza) (Cake) (Etc)

Thanks for the feedback. Blue shirt and orange font sounds pretty cool. I agree with the clipart statement. Also, I will change the font. It's a little too "boring"

**203mh** · 10-28-2014, 03:48 PM

Eh.. graphics are part of my income so..

Enlarge the pics, personally I'd just have it saying "Off season" play around with fonts and colors as well.

**tumtum** · 10-28-2014, 06:39 PM

Originally Posted by 203mh

Eh.. graphics are part of my income so..

Enlarge the pics, personally I'd just have it saying "Off season" play around with fonts and colors as well.

Offseason
(Food)weights(food)

Have it say offseason, then have 3 pics below it, limit amount of colors, 2 max, think "clean"

The design.. Definitely not the eating

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 09:46 PM

hmmm I can try that out!

**emanfitness** · 10-28-2014, 09:47 PM

Originally Posted by tumtum

Offseason
(Food)weights(food)

Have it say offseason, then have 3 pics below it, limit amount of colors, 2 max, think "clean"

The design.. Definitely not the eating

i can play around with that too...

What kinda foods would fit well? I'm thinking keeping ice cream on there for sure. I might throw in a pizza lmao.

Thoughts?

**Jonphinguyen7** · 10-29-2014, 06:13 AM

Originally Posted by emanfitness

i can play around with that too...

What kinda foods would fit well? I'm thinking keeping ice cream on there for sure. I might throw in a pizza lmao.

Thoughts?

For me I love ice cream and pizza in the winter.

**B-Neva** · 10-29-2014, 06:21 AM

put the images side by side not top to bottom

**hzx** · 10-29-2014, 06:32 AM

I think any clothing related to lifting memes is absolutely horrible. But that's just me I'm sure a lot of others will like it

**B-Neva** · 10-29-2014, 07:36 AM

Originally Posted by hzx

I think any clothing related to lifting memes is absolutely horrible. But that's just me I'm sure a lot of others will like it

uwotm8??

**SammyJr** · 10-29-2014, 08:00 AM

make a levrone shirt and i'll buy it

**nonamewut** · 10-29-2014, 08:29 AM

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**Patrick-DK** · 10-29-2014, 02:30 PM

Worst shirt I've seen in quite a while, about 27 years to be exact. Sorry

**emanfitness** · 10-30-2014, 10:25 PM

Took some people's advice. Still messing around. What do you guys think now?

**hairlineofpeace** · 10-31-2014, 06:23 AM

Originally Posted by emanfitness

Took some people's advice. Still messing around. What do you guys think now?

- Not a good font

- Bad spacing in said font

- Extremely generic pictographs

- Has been done before, but better: e.g. 'eat lift sleep'-variants

**MaKaiser** · 10-31-2014, 07:29 AM

What would be a better idea imo would be to make gym wear for off seasons or for people who don't particularly like posing around in their skin tight under armour tops and vests.

Something like a loose breathable jumper or likewise for shorts.

Could have some baggier t shirts that still have a good shape to them etc.

Keep it relatively plain with a tasteful logo somewhere.

**B-Neva** · 10-31-2014, 07:53 AM

Originally Posted by makaiser

what would be a better idea imo would be to make gym wear for off seasons or for people who don't particularly like posing around in their skin tight under armour tops and vests.

something like a loose breathable jumper or likewise for shorts.

Could have some baggier t shirts that still have a good shape to them etc.

Keep it relatively plain with a tasteful logo somewhere.

weirdos!

**littlearm** · 10-31-2014, 08:33 AM

I think the older designs were better - the comic book explosions are way too distracting.

There's a fundamental problem with the joke though. Those 3-icon shirts typically have two "normal" icons, then the third icon is the funny one. You're doing one normal icon (the lifter) and two jokes (the food). I think it would work better as "Lift - Sleep - Pizza" or something like that.

**B-Neva** · 10-31-2014, 08:58 AM

Originally Posted by littlearm

I think the older designs were better - the comic book explosions are way too distracting.

There's a fundamental problem with the joke though. Those 3-icon shirts typically have two "normal" icons, then the third icon is the funny one. You're doing one normal icon (the lifter) and two jokes (the food). I think it would work better as "Lift - Sleep - Pizza" or something like that.

I was mid typing something liekt his but got distracted at work lol You need 3 diff things not 2 of the same.

**Devils** · 10-31-2014, 09:49 AM

Originally Posted by hzx

I think any clothing related to lifting memes is absolutely horrible. But that's just me I'm sure a lot of others will like it

the douchebag masses are a huge industry, just look at flag fail, gymshark lol a ****ing shark?

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