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    Honest feedback on my lil bros 2nd Song!! (SRS) will rep

    Some of you have heard the previous track, and the feedback was very much appreciated!

    will rep any criticism! Srs


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    Not my style of misic, but it sounds like what you would hear on the radio. So i would say he did good
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    Not my style of misic, but it sounds like what you would hear on the radio. So i would say he did good
    Thank you bro, thats very kind!
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    Sounds cool.

    Now rep me.
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    Originally Posted by CoolKnees View Post
    Sounds cool.

    Now rep me.
    Glad you liked it!!!
    You must spread some reputation around before giving it to CoolKnees again.

    will rep asap brah, thats a promise!!!
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    Originally Posted by XXXProSniperXXX View Post
    sick brah your bro gonna become a misc legend with his career
    Thats the goal!
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    These threads usually never turn out well, but this is an exception. Your brother has good flow. Not a huge fan of this style of music, but he definitely has something. Saw a comment from someone in Surrey, BC. You from there?
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    Originally Posted by celticbhoy88 View Post
    These threads usually never turn out well, but this is an exception. Your brother has good flow. Not a huge fan of this style of music, but he definitely has something. Saw a comment from someone in Surrey, BC. You from there?
    Thank you bro! Glad you liked it. Ya surrey! You too?
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    Seems a bit to basic to me, he's not bad, but not ready for primetime. Not hyped enough, doesn't seem excited I guess. For US atleast, Canada might have a different preference
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    he can flow and he has nice bars but nothing that stands out tbh. hes not bad. hes actually good. everything was good. it just wouldn't stand out to this generation. but for hip hop heads and people into straight hip hop , this guy would be appealing
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    I dig it.
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    Originally Posted by jonmcd46 View Post
    Seems a bit to basic to me, he's not bad, but not ready for primetime. Not hyped enough, doesn't seem excited I guess. For US atleast, Canada might have a different preference
    Thanks brah!

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    he can flow and he has nice bars but nothing that stands out tbh. hes not bad. hes actually good. everything was good. it just wouldn't stand out to this generation. but for hip hop heads and people into straight hip hop , this guy would be appealing
    hip hop heads are the target audience(:

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    I dig it.
    aha awesome man! thanks! repd
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    Too nasaly bro.

    He has to learn to start breathing/speaking from the diaphragm.

    I say speaking as well cause you gotta get that comfortable til you don't even have to think about it.

    Will make his voice sound more powerful, richer, etc., and take that nasal sound away.

    Once you get a hang of it you will be able to tell and also get a sense of almost physically pushing your voice down.

    Look up some tutorials on how to sing on youtube the info's also applicable to rappers.

    Everything else is dope he just needs to work on his voice a little and saying it with his chest.
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    Originally Posted by ChildOfPoodle View Post
    Some of you have heard the previous track, and the feedback was very much appreciated!

    will rep any criticism! Srs


    https://soundcloud.com/intrepidtv/spark
    pretty good actually, about a third of the way in the chorus would be better maybe if it was a bit of a different mix up of the beat or built up a little more. Something about it is just slightly to repetitive.
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    I like the opening riff and he sounds a bit like D-Loc from Kottonmouth Kings who I'm a longtime fan of.

    I enjoyed it but from what I've seen of this style it only appeals to a very niche market
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    Originally Posted by MBisonSon View Post
    Too nasaly bro.

    He has to learn to start breathing/speaking from the diaphragm.

    I say speaking as well cause you gotta get that comfortable til you don't even have to think about it.

    Will make his voice sound more powerful, richer, etc., and take that nasal sound away.

    Once you get a hang of it you will be able to tell and also get a sense of almost physically pushing your voice down.

    Look up some tutorials on how to sing on youtube the info's also applicable to rappers.

    Everything else is dope he just needs to work on his voice a little and saying it with his chest.
    This is good feedback, thanks brah! This will be applied to the next track for sure and i hope you hear it! (:


    Originally Posted by turtleman198 View Post
    pretty good actually, about a third of the way in the chorus would be better maybe if it was a bit of a different mix up of the beat or built up a little more. Something about it is just slightly to repetitive.
    thanks for the feedback homie G

    Originally Posted by Charuto222 View Post
    I like the opening riff and he sounds a bit like D-Loc from Kottonmouth Kings who I'm a longtime fan of.

    I enjoyed it but from what I've seen of this style it only appeals to a very niche market
    Haven't heard of him but will check him out asap! Yea that's true, the target audience is quite limited. Not a fan of mumble rap however
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    Originally Posted by LoveHateLift View Post
    haha hope that means you enjoyed it!

    Originally Posted by ballsman12 View Post
    the beat is really ****, the hook is garbage, the whole thing sounds the same from start to finish, there's nothing about this song that makes me want to play it again. Keep working at it.
    Ight thx brah, hopefully you get impressed on the next track then. Will rep still
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    Originally Posted by ChildOfPoodle View Post
    This is good feedback, thanks brah! This will be applied to the next track for sure and i hope you hear it! (:
    Bro I'm into and have decent knowledge basically every step of the process of making a song.

    Recording, mixing, making beats, all that stuff.

    Anyways I'd love you give critical feedback.

    Just don't be one of them dudes who gets all butt hurt if I say X,Y,Z are wrong.

    I've came across guys like that who only want the good news, I feel like most artists know what's good and what's bad but may not know how to fix what's good.

    Anyways look forward to hearing more.
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    Originally Posted by MBisonSon View Post
    Bro I'm into and have decent knowledge basically every step of the process of making a song.

    Recording, mixing, making beats, all that stuff.

    Anyways I'd love you give critical feedback.

    Just don't be one of them dudes who gets all butt hurt if I say X,Y,Z are wrong.

    I've came across guys like that who only want the good news, I feel like most artists know what's good and what's bad but may not know how to fix what's good.

    Anyways look forward to hearing more.
    Appreciate everything you've said bro! You've had the most honest and helpful feedback so far. I'm actually looking for the "bad news" so it can help turn the next song into a better track! The positive feedback is very heartwarming tho, and very much appreciated.

    Thanks brah!!
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    He definitely has talent. I thought the beat was horrendous. Some parts of his delivery felt rushed, just so he could catch up with the beat. You don't want to be trying to chase the wave, you want to surf the wave. Same goes with a beat. He needs to be on top of that beat.

    But yeah, if he works on his flow and gets better beats I think he can make it.

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    Not my style but I recognize talent when I see it. You've got a lot of potential man.
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    I think your brother has talent, ok flow, non-bull****ty lyrical themes. I just feel there's some conviction missing powering the lyrics because of what people have already said.

    Feel the track could be better mixed, but that's not his fault unless he's producing his own tracks.
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    He sounds like a "white rapper" and not like Eminem either, no racist. A lot of white rappers lack that aggressiveness/swagger...

    His voice just doesn't pull me. It's too generic bro. Its like he's just reciting his bars. He has to emphasize hard hitting lines. I wrote and flowed a bit in HS/college so I get it, he has decent bars and an alright flow but overall, not my style of sound.

    Sorry bro, not feeling it.
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    He's a good rapper

    The production sucks though. He needs to hook up with a decent producer if he wants to make it anywhere

    The mixing is absolutely atrocious
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