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Ryxen
05-20-2009, 03:06 PM
Just something I wrote when I was having a hard time hitting the gym.



An animal, enough said.
Its all in the mind, focus in the head.
I tell myself i can do it.
Then i give it my best.
Pumping the iron hard.
Rising above the rest.
Never giving up.
I wasn't born to fail.
I keep pushing myself.
Effort and you will prevail.

If you want to achieve a goal.
Get up off your chair.
Excuses are why you'll fail.
They never get you anywhere.
If you want to be the best.
You need to put in the sweat.
You need to pump the iron.
If you want to achieve where you want to get.

Don't wait till next week to become who you wanna be.
The transformation starts now, Perfection doesn't come for free.
The more time you wait, the longer it will take.
So bite down hard, and don't give in.
Unleash your inner beast, quitters never win.
Prove to yourself you can do it.
Let the haters hate.
You will be laughing last.
Bodybuilding is your fate.

Timepants
05-20-2009, 03:10 PM
wouldn't excuses are why you'll fail sound better? Other than that it's a Badass poem/motivation tool brah.

Ryxen
05-20-2009, 03:16 PM
Yeah i edited it, thanks for that

ONpump17
05-20-2009, 03:50 PM
awesome poem man, im saving that

Andyg37
05-20-2009, 03:52 PM
that was good brah repped

trance__dreamer
05-20-2009, 07:52 PM
i really reeeeally REALLY like it. *saves it*

rep'ed. =)

starvin
05-20-2009, 09:24 PM
good stuff brah

Mouzer
05-22-2009, 03:29 PM
I like it, well written. repped

Gemini80
05-22-2009, 09:26 PM
ohh thats good, thanks for sharing. Im gonna have to print that...maybe put it on my fridge. :)


Just something I wrote when I was having a hard time hitting the gym.



An animal, enough said.
Its all in the mind, focus in the head.
I tell myself i can do it.
Then i give it my best.
Pumping the iron hard.
Rising above the rest.
Never giving up.
I wasn't born to fail.
I keep pushing myself.
Effort and you will prevail.

If you want to achieve a goal.
Get up off your chair.
Excuses are why you'll fail.
They never get you anywhere.
If you want to be the best.
You need to put in the sweat.
You need to pump the iron.
If you want to achieve where you want to get.

Don't wait till next week to become who you wanna be.
The transformation starts now, Perfection doesn't come for free.
The more time you wait, the longer it will take.
So bite down hard, and don't give in.
Unleash your inner beast, quitters never win.
Prove to yourself you can do it.
Let the haters hate.
You will be laughing last.
Bodybuilding is your fate.

mic_to_befit76
07-25-2009, 09:48 AM
Awsome poem, I really like it.

IRAQ911
07-25-2009, 11:55 AM
Thank you for sharing :) liked it!

Arkadian
07-25-2009, 05:14 PM
awesome poem man, im saving that

Thanks for this!