Brenda Kelly visits her close friend Kelly Ryan at the Clark County Detention Center. Months away from her and Craig Titus' January trial for the murder of Melissa James, see how Kelly is coping with life in prison.
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08-08-2006, 02:06 PM #1
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Brenda Kelly - Kelly Ryan - Exclusive Interview From Jail!twitter.com/i_am_the_goat
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That sh*t article I just read
Ohmigod. forget bad journalism - its bad writing altogether. It wasnt even READABLE for chrissakes. "You look great there isnt a line on your face??!!"
How you even be serious when putting that in your "article."
Maybe her facelift is on too tight lmao.
Just cringingly bad writing. Stick to taking your clothes off, hon.MY FAVORITE BB.COM QUOTES:
"A man is to a human what a retarded pigeon is to a bird." - rubrian
"Most men and women are lousy. Let's forget the gender game for a second here folks, and remember that most PEOPLE are ****, period." - peng
NOTE: I am veerrrrrrryy candid: "overly-sensitive" people should avoid my posts/threads entirely - YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE.
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We all know its a bad article, but to be mature about it, we need to list why it was a bad article:
1. Almost as many pics of Brenda as Kelly. Brenda = 4 of herself while Kelly = 6 (3 included in the competition mini-montage). Who's the article about? And what was the point of some of the pictures? I don't care about seeing Brenda next to the sign for the jail. I also don't care about seeing her making her entrance into the prison.
2. One of the main rules for writing, as was beaten into my head many times, was have a clear path with the writing. Stay on course and don't veer off too many times. There were many sidetracks in that article. A better path would have been: background of Craig and Brenda, going to the jail, what happened before seeing Brenda, the interview, and final thoughts.
3. Did anyone want to hear about girl talk? If you talked about that, fine. It doesn't seem appropriate to talk about personal things in a public writing.
Overall, I would expect better writing from a high school student. Keep Brenda to fitness articles from now on please.
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And Brenda Kelly calls herself a journalist. You've got to be kidding. I cannot get past the posed pictures in front of the jailhouse. Unbelievable.
Bodybuilding.com, take that piece of crap article off your site!!! It degrades you! And I will not continue purchasing from your site if you leave this up and think it's anything but pathetic. I am serious. Very disappointed in you.
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"Kelly was radiant with an inner light that shone even across the monitor screen. Kelly looked wonderful actually and wore glasses that were becoming to her although I had never seen her in them. They suited her and I recognized her right away."
Is this for real??????
"During all of this it is strange watching the digital LED counter at the bottom of the screen count down your time the whole time you are talking."
Totally pathetic writing skills. Very childlike with absolutely no grasp of English grammar or diction. Some of it read like a direct translation of a foreign language. An awkward read. What a load of rubbish!!!!
08-11-2006, 01:11 PM #25
Unbelievable! Smiling and posing for the cellphone video while she slowly moves through the prison door? Posing in front of the detention center sign like it was outside the Statue of Liberty?
What I find truly unnerving is how bb.com can actually allow something like to pass through the editors for posting release? Front page stuff, with all the bells and whistles?
Sorry guys, but that was just pathetic.
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Brenda Kelly Interview
Having Just Read This Useless Piece Of Non Informative Information? Did Brenda Kelly Actually Get Any Information At All Regarding This Tragedy Regarding Her And Her Husband ? Did She Ask Kelly Ryan If Her Or Her Husband Had Commited This Crime ? I Did Not Notice Anywhere That Kelly Ryan States That She Was Innocent; That Would Be The First Statement Out Of My Mouth If I Had A Close Friend Visiting Myself In Prison. As Already Stated By Others The Photos Of The Outside Of The Centre Are Irelevent; There Is No Smoke Without Fire ; And I Dont Think That Reading Out Of The Bible Will Help Much If The Crime Has Been Commited; Has Anyone Said Outright That They Did Not Commit This Offence/