hi everyone plz check out my song and let me know what u think
*****://soundcloud.com/thekingling/vengeance
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04-22-2014, 09:58 PM #1
new song, will be giving reps if you listen :)
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04-22-2014, 09:59 PM #2
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04-22-2014, 10:02 PM #3
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04-22-2014, 10:34 PM #4
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04-22-2014, 10:48 PM #5
Bro not gonna lie, that was dope. The beat went perfect with the asian theme music lol. I could imagine that song in a fighting game or somethin but I couldnt see anyone rapping on it(if that was your purpose, to make instrumentals for rappers)... Im in bed bout to knock out and I was noddin my head to it
+@sian crew♫
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04-22-2014, 11:37 PM #6
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04-22-2014, 11:38 PM #7
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fix link for you:
http://soundcloud.com/thekingling/vengeance
and listened, nice job bro!SNAPCHAT: KING_JAYYDA
Youtube music: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCGekSg1w7bJJvOt2Q4OAipg
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04-23-2014, 06:29 AM #8
at 54 when the beat actually starts, it looks like its another song, you have to make the speaking go in with the beat, what program do you use? You should put some reverb and delay on that voice so it echos and joins at 54, also put a reverse cymbal for a short rise up and then a crash, it will be a better transition. Other than that, its a nice beat.
edit: you should put some part of the voice in the middle or ending just echoing slightly, put the sound pretty low.
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04-23-2014, 07:58 AM #9
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04-23-2014, 08:00 AM #10
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04-23-2014, 08:01 AM #11
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04-23-2014, 12:28 PM #12
Enjoyed the listen, you got the right idea but I strongly agree with gainmaster. There was no build and no increase in intensity. I have some pretty nice drum samples from the likes of Toontrack. Hit me up and I'd be willing to work with you to replace the kick drum on this one for more power. You can find me on Soundcloud under Btrailblazer.
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04-23-2014, 12:49 PM #13
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04-23-2014, 12:50 PM #14
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youre pretty good. good touch with pulp fiction intro but it was kinda too long since half the world has adhd haha
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04-23-2014, 01:37 PM #15
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