RAP BRAHs, Will REP for input on my music!

[MrDANNY]

I've recently began recording raps I write, I'm not too good at using the software and my mic isn't too good,
Using this as more of an attempt to display my lyrical prowess more than anything else.

Here are 3 I made:









I know they're not "freestyles" but rappers seem to call any verse they rap that aren't official songs freestyles, so yeah

[Lindoras]

I like the first song the best. Kind of a old school swing to it. srs
But try to work on your speech a bit I'd say? Some words look like you're having a hard time pronouncing. Other then that 7/10

[GreatestEver]

Actually pretty good man.

I have listened to a lot of amateur rapeprs on youtube in my time and a lot of white guys sound similar to your voice, if you had proper editing etc. your voice would sound a bit better which would really help.

I'll agree with the above psoter in that some of your words are a little hard to understand and need to be pronounced better

[Hrcules]

You should definitely work some more on the flow, and the voice is kinda like, funny, you feeling me. Maybe get some help with editing. Keep going hard at it though, you can do better than this.

[mizzOe]

those are some pretty nice lyrics - some insane multi's in the second one..

but yeah, that voice is too soft, it doesn't project well. other than that, you're not too bad

[MrDANNY]

those are some pretty nice lyrics - some insane multi's in the second one..

but yeah, that voice is too soft, it doesn't project well. other than that, you're not too bad

Yeah, definitely have to work on that

[MrDANNY]

Yeah, definitely have to work on that

bumpp