I've recently began recording raps I write, I'm not too good at using the software and my mic isn't too good,
Using this as more of an attempt to display my lyrical prowess more than anything else.
Here are 3 I made:
I know they're not "freestyles" but rappers seem to call any verse they rap that aren't official songs freestyles, so yeah
02-28-2012, 03:04 AM #1
RAP BRAHs, Will REP for input on my music!
02-28-2012, 03:05 AM #2
02-28-2012, 04:17 AM #3
Actually pretty good man.
I have listened to a lot of amateur rapeprs on youtube in my time and a lot of white guys sound similar to your voice, if you had proper editing etc. your voice would sound a bit better which would really help.
I'll agree with the above psoter in that some of your words are a little hard to understand and need to be pronounced better*Positive Crew*
02-28-2012, 05:04 AM #4
02-28-2012, 05:27 AM #5
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those are some pretty nice lyrics - some insane multi's in the second one..
but yeah, that voice is too soft, it doesn't project well. other than that, you're not too badMisc Strength Crew
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02-29-2012, 01:08 AM #6
02-29-2012, 06:45 PM #7