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Old 08-08-2006, 03:06 PM   #1
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Brenda Kelly - Kelly Ryan - Exclusive Interview From Jail!

Brenda Kelly visits her close friend Kelly Ryan at the Clark County Detention Center. Months away from her and Craig Titus' January trial for the murder of Melissa James, see how Kelly is coping with life in prison.

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Old 08-08-2006, 04:14 PM   #2
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Who was this article about? Brenda Kelly, "world famous fitness competitor" with "no lines on her beautiful face?" Or Kelly Ryan, accused murderer?
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That was one of the most pathetically written "articles" I've ever read.
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Old 08-08-2006, 04:26 PM   #4
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Who was this article about? Brenda Kelly, "world famous fitness competitor" with "no lines on her beautiful face?" Or Kelly Ryan, accused murderer?
OK, if the article was about Kelly Ryan, perhaps one of Kelly's several magazine covers would have been featured.

The only cover that we saw was of Brenda Kelly, the "author."

There ya go.
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Who was this article about? Brenda Kelly, "world famous fitness competitor" with "no lines on her beautiful face?" Or Kelly Ryan, accused murderer?

no 1's heard of her in Ireland, USA aint the whole world Brenda
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Pathetic journalism skills. I may have given her at least a little credit if she'd asked Kelly how she and Craig aspired to be the dumbest criminals in recent times...
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Old 08-08-2006, 05:38 PM   #8
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Thumbs down That sh*t article I just read

Ohmigod. forget bad journalism - its bad writing altogether. It wasnt even READABLE for chrissakes. "You look great there isnt a line on your face??!!"

How you even be serious when putting that in your "article."

Maybe her facelift is on too tight lmao.

Just cringingly bad writing. Stick to taking your clothes off, hon.
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Old 08-08-2006, 06:47 PM   #9
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Wow, I'm glad she and her murdering husband are so close. That is so sweet! And both girls' faces look totally natural too! Wow, I am so happy!!!!
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Old 08-09-2006, 12:16 PM   #10
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We all know its a bad article, but to be mature about it, we need to list why it was a bad article:
1. Almost as many pics of Brenda as Kelly. Brenda = 4 of herself while Kelly = 6 (3 included in the competition mini-montage). Who's the article about? And what was the point of some of the pictures? I don't care about seeing Brenda next to the sign for the jail. I also don't care about seeing her making her entrance into the prison.

2. One of the main rules for writing, as was beaten into my head many times, was have a clear path with the writing. Stay on course and don't veer off too many times. There were many sidetracks in that article. A better path would have been: background of Craig and Brenda, going to the jail, what happened before seeing Brenda, the interview, and final thoughts.

3. Did anyone want to hear about girl talk? If you talked about that, fine. It doesn't seem appropriate to talk about personal things in a public writing.

Overall, I would expect better writing from a high school student. Keep Brenda to fitness articles from now on please.
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And Brenda Kelly calls herself a journalist. You've got to be kidding. I cannot get past the posed pictures in front of the jailhouse. Unbelievable.

Bodybuilding.com, take that piece of crap article off your site!!! It degrades you! And I will not continue purchasing from your site if you leave this up and think it's anything but pathetic. I am serious. Very disappointed in you.
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Horrible, Horrible article! Who would ever let this "woman" write something?!
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Old 08-10-2006, 09:40 PM   #13
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Did Brenda Kelly only finish grade 10 English????
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Old 08-10-2006, 09:42 PM   #14
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This article was PATHETIC!!!!! Next time I see Brenda at a show, i'm going to laugh in her face about this piece of crap article.
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Unbelievable! Smiling and posing for the cellphone video while she slowly moves through the prison door? Posing in front of the detention center sign like it was outside the Statue of Liberty?

What I find truly unnerving is how bb.com can actually allow something like to pass through the editors for posting release? Front page stuff, with all the bells and whistles?

Sorry guys, but that was just pathetic.

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Absolutely HORRIBLE article. Brenda Kelly just wants to expose herself. Did her 5 year old son write the article????
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Silly and Sad!!!

Pathetic!!!
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Wow. That was world class crap. I hope nobody paid for that article.
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Thumbs down Brenda Kelly Interview

Having Just Read This Useless Piece Of Non Informative Information? Did Brenda Kelly Actually Get Any Information At All Regarding This Tragedy Regarding Her And Her Husband ? Did She Ask Kelly Ryan If Her Or Her Husband Had Commited This Crime ? I Did Not Notice Anywhere That Kelly Ryan States That She Was Innocent; That Would Be The First Statement Out Of My Mouth If I Had A Close Friend Visiting Myself In Prison. As Already Stated By Others The Photos Of The Outside Of The Centre Are Irelevent; There Is No Smoke Without Fire ; And I Dont Think That Reading Out Of The Bible Will Help Much If The Crime Has Been Commited; Has Anyone Said Outright That They Did Not Commit This Offence/
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LI3K 0MG UR H4IR H1GHLIGHTS R S0 PR3TTY OMG I AM GOING TO TOTALLY IGNORE THE FACT THAT YOU AND YOUR HUSBAND BURNED A WOMAN TO DEATH, BECAUSE I'D RATHER WRITE A ****TY ARTICLE ON HOW I FEEL SO SORRY FOR YOU AND YOUR PATHETIC HAIR EXTENSIONS

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I think i'm going to throw up. This article is disgusting.
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Article is beyond laughable. Brenda Kelly, you're in the wrong forest. Not sure you're even fit to be flippin' burgers. Get over yerself!

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Brenda Kelly (interview, What Interview??)

This Sucked!!!

Nothing Else Needs To Be Said......it Sucked, Sucked, Sucked!!!
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how to write an interview...

i just read the interview about Steriod use. it is not the greatest interview i ever read, it was still solid. gave me a ton of infl that i did not know. also it stayed on course...no off tangent stories.

also no photos of the author out side of a lab.

i feel sorry for BB.com here they are trying to get a story about the "sexiest" story in the BB world today so they send in some one that can get the interview w/ the hope she turns in something about the crime. instead they get a second grader's research paper on why Ken & Barbie broke up. they spent all that money and they have nothing to show for it.

BB.com i still love you. next time pay the author based on the quality of the work. NEVER pay in cash upfront.

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i just read the interview about Steriod use. it is not the greatest interview i ever read, it was still solid. gave me a ton of infl that i did not know. also it stayed on course...no off tangent stories.

also no photos of the author out side of a lab.

i feel sorry for BB.com here they are trying to get a story about the "sexiest" story in the BB world today so they send in some one that can get the interview w/ the hope she turns in something about the crime. instead they get a second grader's research paper on why Ken & Barbie broke up. they spent all that money and they have nothing to show for it.

BB.com i still love you. next time pay the author based on the quality of the work. NEVER pay in cash upfront.

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So TRUE - I was just forwarded this article by a friend of mine who was cracking up at how it was so poorly written. But the photos are the truly most RIDICULOUS thing that I have ever seen!!! Then the "author" decided to put one of her covers from thirty-five years ago up! F**king priceless.

Just trash. BB.com shame shame SHAME on you.

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Brenda, you were far too partial to Kelly. BodyBuilding.com should have sent an unbiased reporter to interview Kelly. I was extremely disappointed. I am certain if your sister was Melissa James you would not call Kellly a friend. She would have been a past friend.
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Cynthia, is it? Um, i don't cavort with suspected murderers so the answer to your question as to whether I have been to visit one in incarceration, would be a louod resounding NO.

If Brenda Kelly was your ffriend, youd tell her to lay off the plastic surgery.
And tell her to look for another career outside of writing ANYTHING.

Instead of slamming us for "hating" look at yourself for "enabling" a retard.

Thanks hoope that helps.
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