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Very interesting article! I find the enthusiasum refreshing and motivating. However, there are two repeating falsities you need to remedy:
1. "Muscle is energy." - This is a fundamentally flawed statement. Muscle is not energy. Muscle can expend energy to contract or 'do work' . Muscles cannot function without energy and the body has to provide it through a chemical process, but the two are entirely seperate entities. I understand you may be using this statement metaphorically, but this can be equated to saying 'an internal combustion engine is energy'. You could possibly say 'muscle is power' as it does have the potential to generate power (by using energy), but there is no possible way to interpret muscle as energy.
2. Every statement that includes "creating energy" - The first law of thermodynamics, or the conservation of energy theory, states that energy can change forms, but cannot be created or destroyed. You could say 'create power', 'do work', 'create force' or 'expend energy', but there is no concievable way to 'create energy' in any way.
I think you may have misinterpreted some of the things you read. You may want to consider checking some facts and making the approriate changes or you may risk losing the overall point you are trying to make to your reader.
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