Philosophy....
While the author's intent is noble, I should stress that the purpose of writing or speaking is to be understood - i.e. to communicate a message to one's intended audience.
The role of philosophy is to make things clear through deduction and analogy when neccessary. In this case, this is like a "finger pointing at the moon" - meaning that the author has here presented a system of explination that aims to elucidate a concept. Instead, and because the system of explination is confusing, one finds oneself trying to understand the system of explination, instead of focusing on the thing at which this finger points.
I have no doubt that the author spent considerable time and effort on his work - in fact, I know that he did, because I spend considerable time and effort on my own work. So, I thank him for his contributions. I would say only that future articles might be more simple so that the philosophically uninitiated can understand them without prerequisit knowledge.
Best,
-Clayton South
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