This is some heavy stuff... dang...

[Adam444]

So I'm copying poems (23 of them) because they are due tomorrow... and I read this thing, and it hit me hard.

"
10th GRADE...
As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl
next to me. She was my so called "best friend". I
stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was
mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew
it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for
the notes she had missed the day before and handed
them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on
the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but
I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

11th GRADE...
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was
in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had
broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she
didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to
her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing
she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep.
She looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on
the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that
I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm
just too shy, and I don't know why.

SENIOR YEAR...
The day before prom she walked to my locker. "My date
is sick" she said; he's not going to go well, I didn't
have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that
if neither of us had dates, we would go together just
as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after
everything was over, I was standing at her front door
step! I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared
at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine,
but she doesn't think of me like that, and I know it.
Then she said "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave
me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her
to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love
her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.
Graduation Day
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I
could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her
perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get
her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't
notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone
went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and
cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from
my shoulder and said, "you're my best friend, thanks"
and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I
want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

A FEW YEARS LATER...
Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is
getting married now. I watched her say "I do" and
drive off to her new life, married to another man. I
wanted her to be mine, but she didn`t see me like
that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she
came to me and said "you came!". She said "thanks" and
kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her
to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love
her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

FUNERAL...
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl
who used to be my "best friend". At the service, they
read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school
years. This is what it read:
I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't
notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell
him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just
friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't
know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me!
I wish I did too... I thought to my self, and I cried. "

Lesson: Don't hold back.

[chewy lies]

Nice attemp at trying to make a deep post, but you failed miserably.

Lesson: Don't think you are deep when you are just posting dumb crap.

[Jay Rawd]

Oh God.

Now a whole bunch of morons will think that the girl they've been stalking and treating as a queen actually is attracted to them...

Ignore the poem above.

[chewy lies]

Why is this in the sex section?

[Adam444]

Why did you post twice?

Ok Ok fine, I read too many love poems and got emotional. I'm sorry.


: (

[DTGG]

cool poem.. but it aint reality... if ur stuck in the friends zone, ur stuck!

[Jay Rawd]

Originally Posted by Adam444

Ok Ok fine, I read too many love poems and got emotional. I'm sorry.


: (

Men don't get weakened by their emotions.

[Jay Rawd]

Originally Posted by DTGG

cool poem.. but it aint reality... if ur stuck in the friends zone, ur stuck!

Yup. I bet some guy read this and thought to himself that he did have a chance with the girl he's been friends with for years. Nope!

[Adam444]

Who says? Oh yeah, I forgot, every man is a lean-mean iron pumping machine.

Showing emotions is not a sign of weakness. Grow up

[macapollo]

wtf? i cant beat off to this **** :/

[Adam444]

omfg... haha...

but anyway, I thought it was a nice poem. Although rare, this might happen. Guys can GET OUT of the Friends Zone...

[c0nfusi0n]

Originally Posted by Adam444

So I'm copying poems (23 of them) because they are due tomorrow... and I read this thing, and it hit me hard.

"
10th GRADE...
As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl
next to me. She was my so called "best friend". I
stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was
mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew
it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for
the notes she had missed the day before and handed
them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on
the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but
I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

11th GRADE...
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was
in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had
broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she
didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to
her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing
she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep.
She looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on
the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that
I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm
just too shy, and I don't know why.

SENIOR YEAR...
The day before prom she walked to my locker. "My date
is sick" she said; he's not going to go well, I didn't
have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that
if neither of us had dates, we would go together just
as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after
everything was over, I was standing at her front door
step! I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared
at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine,
but she doesn't think of me like that, and I know it.
Then she said "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave
me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her
to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love
her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.
Graduation Day
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I
could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her
perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get
her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't
notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone
went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and
cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from
my shoulder and said, "you're my best friend, thanks"
and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I
want her to know that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

A FEW YEARS LATER...
Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is
getting married now. I watched her say "I do" and
drive off to her new life, married to another man. I
wanted her to be mine, but she didn`t see me like
that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she
came to me and said "you came!". She said "thanks" and
kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her
to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love
her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

FUNERAL...
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl
who used to be my "best friend". At the service, they
read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school
years. This is what it read:
I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't
notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell
him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just
friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't
know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me!
I wish I did too... I thought to my self, and I cried. "

Lesson: Don't hold back.

...

[Jay Rawd]

Originally Posted by Adam444

omfg... haha...

but anyway, I thought it was a nice poem. Although rare, this might happen. Guys can GET OUT of the Friends Zone...

You don't get out of the zone by staying in it. This character stayed in the zone until her death.

BTW, I never said men can't show emotion, I said it shouldn't weaken them or even make them post a thread about a poem that doesn't even bring the slightest moisture into a 12 year old girl's eye. If you seriously felt ANYTHING from this cheesy and crappy poem, you should really go get your T levels checked.

[Adam444]

Why would I get my T levels checked? You said "I didn't say men can't show emotion" yet, you say that I should get my T levels checked cause I'm a "girl"


Anyway, Mr I'm Alpha Male, I so tough me Cave man wo wo.

tsk tsk.

People make a thread about some african's dick. I made a post about a poem. Which one would you rather see? :/ Yeah...

[Jay Rawd]

Originally Posted by Adam444

Why would I get my T levels checked? You said "I didn't say men can't show emotion" yet, you say that I should get my T levels checked cause I'm a "girl"


Anyway, Mr I'm Alpha Male, I so tough me Cave man wo wo.

tsk tsk.

People make a thread about some african's dick. I made a post about a poem. Which one would you rather see? :/ Yeah...

Jesus crip walking Christ...

I said that men can show emotion, but just not let it take control of them. An example would be your emotions taking control of you by you posting this thread about a cheesy poem. It's not even deep. Weak **** you got here. Very weak.

[Shaggy4g63]

meh poem was cheesy but had meaning, and yes you can come outta the friends zone...I'm living proof that a AFC loser POS guy friend can turn that **** aroudn and pound it all night long.

[Adam444]

I wasn't in tears when I posted this. Looks like someone is insecure about being romantic. It's ok.

How about this, you go and grow up emotionally, and realize that it's OK to read a poem once in awhile. Come back, and say that you were sorry.

I'm sure that this poem will be better than anything you will ever write. I'm also sure that you NEVER get weakened or controlled by emotion. You are so strong.

Anyway... don't pass the opportunity to talk to a girl or someone else will. World is full of horny guys, and if you don't do something about it, the girl you loved will be nailed by someone else...

that was the lesson.

[MonarchX]

Where do you find all these women who take you as a friend and don't want anything more? It really doesn't work this way in my high school...
Maybe its not so bad that I live in the Bible Belt...

[Jay Rawd]

Originally Posted by Shaggy4g63

meh poem was cheesy but had meaning, and yes you can come outta the friends zone...I'm living proof that a AFC loser POS guy friend can turn that **** aroudn and pound it all night long.

But you didn't get out of it by keeping up the whole AFC act. In the poem, the guy was being an AFC 100% of the time and the girl still liked him. You can get out of the friends zone, but life isn't like this poem. In the poem, this guy wasn't really in the friends zone, and neither was the girl, They both thought they were. You gotta admit that acting like an AFC like this guy did isn't going to get a girl to like you in that way.

[peng]

I won't lie to you, I couldn't be bothered reading it.

BUT, the only deep thing in the sex section is how deep a lesbian can get a dildo into her girlfriend (which, in my opinion, beats a poem), but i'll give you credit for posting something out of the ordinary.....

[Jay Rawd]

Originally Posted by Adam444

I wasn't in tears when I posted this. Looks like someone is insecure about being romantic. It's ok.

How about this, you go and grow up emotionally, and realize that it's OK to read a poem once in awhile. Come back, and say that you were sorry.

I'm sure that this poem will be better than anything you will ever write. I'm also sure that you NEVER get weakened or controlled by emotion. You are so strong.

Anyway... don't pass the opportunity to talk to a girl or someone else will. World is full of horny guys, and if you don't do something about it, the girl you loved will be nailed by someone else...

that was the lesson.

Romantic? You think this ****ty poem is romantic? I bet you are also fond of roses are red and violets are blue poems.

Nobody said it was wrong to read a poem. Stop making **** up out of nowhere. The only thing I said was that to think THIS cheesy **** was the slightest bit romantic and could get any emotion out of you really tells me there's something wrong with you. I've got news for you: High School poetry isn't deep on any level.

I don't get weakened or controlled by my emotions, either. It used to happen, though. I learned to control them instead of them controlling me.

The lesson is ****. Anyone with sense will know that a girl who considers you as a friend will not want you sexually (unless you get out of the LJBF zone but until then you're screwed).

Oh, and any guy who says he's had sex with a girl that considered him her friend is either full of ****, or has no grasp of the concept of true friendship. If you aren't full of **** and DID have sex with her, she wasn't your friend to begin with.

[MonarchX]

Originally Posted by Jay Rawd

Romantic? You think this ****ty poem is romantic? I bet you are also fond of roses are red and violets are blue poems.

Nobody said it was wrong to read a poem. Stop making **** up out of nowhere. The only thing I said was that to think THIS cheesy **** was the slightest bit romantic and could get any emotion out of you really tells me there's something wrong with you. I've got news for you: High School poetry isn't deep on any level.

I don't get weakened or controlled by my emotions, either. It used to happen, though. I learned to control them instead of them controlling me.

The lesson is ****. Anyone with sense will know that a girl who considers you as a friend will not want you sexually (unless you get out of the LJBF zone but until then you're screwed).

Oh, and any guy who says he's had sex with a girl that considered him her friend is either full of ****, or has no grasp of the concept of true friendship.

Either way you're all idiots.

I find it funny how you guys create all these ZONES and treat the whole relaionship on some kind of segregated basis. "If she did this then she is this, and you are this". I think every situation is different because we are dealing with human beings, not a calculus formula.

Saying that you do not show emotions you just prove that emotions is your weakness. A man does not need balls to stand there and say "It doesn't touch me" but every man is embarassed to cry from a really touching movie because it does take some balls.

Plus, it seems everyone around here meets the shallowest women this world carries...

[PetaPeta]

seen this peom before...anyway..My situation is exactly the same....now im at "senior year" part...do u guys think a best friend can also have feelings for u...? cuz if i hold back too long...another guy will take her...even tho im holding back for a long time...me gonna cry now...

[peng]

Originally Posted by MonarchX

Plus, it seems everyone around here meets the shallowest women this world carries...

Don't take this as an argument.... but I think 99% of females ARE shallow, that's just how it is. If you're lucky enough to find ones that aren't, well done.

Anyway, poems are open to interpretation. Like it or don't like it, doesn't matter. It's your opinion.

[Thudd]

A poem? Splitting sentences up at random points consitutes a poem?

So if I
write like this
it becomes
poetry
?

Bah! REAL poems go like:

There once was a man from Nantucket
Whose dick was so long he could su.... errr, well, you get the idea

[futballman]

hmm nice poem this obviously isnt the section to post it in.. would probably get better replys in misc.

anyways heres a random song:

daaaaddy im soooooo afraid. how will i go on? with you gonneee this way.


thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ts my job! thats what i do! every thing i do is because of you!

^
good drinking song.

random joke:

why is 6 afraid of 7? because 7 ate 9! hahahahhahahahahaahhaha

^
saw it on a commercial

[PimpJigga]

Whatever, the poem wasn't that bad man.

I'd hit it...

[JBDW]

Not a poem, more of a story. And I think everyone is reading too much into this as a PUA/AFC situation...just take the final message as what it was meant to be...which is to not restrict yourself just because you're afraid.

[Pumped4LifeX]

My keyboard is covered in tears man. That was DEEP!

[eehee]

Originally Posted by chewy lies

Nice attemp at trying to make a deep post, but you failed miserably.

Lesson: Don't think you are deep when you are just posting dumb crap.

Shut up! I'm drunk and this touched me deeply, but does he turn gay at the end? WTF? lOL NM i'm going to bed...

i JUST reread it, he's not gay, the girl actually liked him!1 OMG
OK NOW i'm really gonna bed.