You dun messed up on that bulk, but impressive cut regardless. I watched the video and that should be enough evidence to convince everybody that this is legit, for once a red OP delivered
You did the right thing. who's to say she hasn't done things like this in the past before without telling you brah? or that she wouldn't in the future? If it happened once...
Step 1: Fix the beat. too generic, that's probably the most-used chord progression I've ever heard. Make the drums sound strong instead of just there. Experiment with different tempos that can fit...