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GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-10-2012, 04:08 AM
Hey guys, please take a look at my website and give some criticism to it so that i can improve it, i gain some revenaue off of it via advertisements so i kinda want this website to blow up so i can make some cash off of it, anyone give me some constructive criticism on what i should add to improve it and i will rep you

http://battlefieldstrategyplays.com/

EDIT: Maybe click an add so i can earn some revenue?

guy20
01-10-2012, 04:35 AM
looks clean and legit, i would add a logo or banner of some sort at the top of the website and maybe a short (one line) explanation about the website (above home, about us etc..)

edit: also put the ads on the sides/bottom, the current location inside the content of the website interferes with the natural flow of things imo.

BullStampede
01-10-2012, 07:04 AM
looks clean and legit, i would add a logo or banner of some sort at the top of the website and maybe a short (one line) explanation about the website (above home, about us etc..)

edit: also put the ads on the sides/bottom, the current location inside the content of the website interferes with the natural flow of things imo.

these. Also, where are the strategies?!

Edit: nvm found them. Make the buttons at the top a different color brah

drhype
01-10-2012, 07:06 AM
Not feeling the orange at the top. Try maybe silver or like a desert brown? Also no ads found, are they up yet?

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-10-2012, 08:42 PM
Bump, The ads should be up btw

Raesh
01-10-2012, 10:12 PM
EDIT: Maybe click an add so i can earn some revenue?

Hmmm, done. I feel dirty and used.

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-11-2012, 04:01 AM
Good morning bump!

guy20
01-11-2012, 04:10 AM
Good morning bump!

how about some morning reps for giving out constructive criticism?

LiftersHigh
01-11-2012, 06:30 AM
You need a logo in the upper left-hand corner. It looks naked without one.

titansmlb102
01-11-2012, 06:34 AM
1) Wordpress/10
2) Logo in top left would make it look better
3) Buttons at top need a different color
4) Color scheme doesn't match with AdChoice banner at the top, it just makes it look very sloppy. If I clicked on your site out of google I'd back out because it looks cut rate, therefore the info must be reposts/cut rate.

CunningStunt
01-11-2012, 08:02 AM
Slow and about 5 years out of date. Sorry mate.

CoreMaster75
01-11-2012, 08:41 AM
Sorry man, I tried the same site wayyy before you. I just never put enough time in, but you're already screwed with the URL. You'll also need map blueprints, personalized/narrated videos, and a ton of info screenshots.

The URL should be what they are searching for on google, which is likely to be: BF3, Tips, Strategies, Tactics. Doubt anyone is going to search for the full name of battlefield without the 3 or plays.

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-11-2012, 06:21 PM
Sorry man, I tried the same site wayyy before you. I just never put enough time in, but you're already screwed with the URL. You'll also need map blueprints, personalized/narrated videos, and a ton of info screenshots.

The URL should be what they are searching for on google, which is likely to be: BF3, Tips, Strategies, Tactics. Doubt anyone is going to search for the full name of battlefield without the 3 or plays.

What would be an easier URL?

JM18
01-11-2012, 06:29 PM
-Get a bigger background. The current image only takes up half the page.

ebongo91
01-11-2012, 06:32 PM
edit: ^^ your resolution is higher than most


Hey guys, please take a look at my website and give some criticism to it so that i can improve it, i gain some revenaue off of it via advertisements so i kinda want this website to blow up so i can make some cash off of it, anyone give me some constructive criticism on what i should add to improve it and i will rep you

http://battlefieldstrategyplays.com/

EDIT: Maybe click an add so i can earn some revenue?

OP, I can make a much better front banner for you. Just give some time (and some reps :D), and also tell me what your theme is and what the name you want it to be.

pashtokid
01-11-2012, 06:40 PM
Hi Ryan Lewis.

ebongo91
01-11-2012, 06:56 PM
here's a sample OP, I can put a title in, etc...

CoreMaster75
01-11-2012, 06:59 PM
What would be an easier URL?

BF3strategies.com

BF3tips.com

Do some keyword research on BF3 searches

McDoobliesBrah
01-11-2012, 07:06 PM
Hey guys, please take a look at my website and give some criticism to it so that i can improve it, i gain some revenaue off of it via advertisements so i kinda want this website to blow up so i can make some cash off of it, anyone give me some constructive criticism on what i should add to improve it and i will rep you

EDIT: Maybe click an add so i can earn some revenue?

Just looked at it briefly. I've spotted a few errors here and there. "Battlefield Strategy Guides, Hints, Tips, and Tricks" remove the comma make them all down the left side or right side. So you have up the top 'Battlefield Strategy Guides' then down the left or right side, having, 'Hints' 'Tips' 'Tricks' So if people specifically want hints they can find it. making it alot easier for people to use the site and have a good read rather then scrolling through 1 post looking for the part that all these are placed in. Up the top with

Home
About Us
Contact Us
Guides/Tips/Tricks
Multiplayer Gameplay
Privacy Policy

^^^ Make this stand out more, If someone is Interwebs retarded they'll never find this shi-

Weezy32
01-11-2012, 07:46 PM
home, about, etc etc is way too small. Make it bigger. Also the picture in the backround is hard on the eyes in my opinion.

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-12-2012, 03:56 AM
Just looked at it briefly. I've spotted a few errors here and there. "Battlefield Strategy Guides, Hints, Tips, and Tricks" remove the comma make them all down the left side or right side. So you have up the top 'Battlefield Strategy Guides' then down the left or right side, having, 'Hints' 'Tips' 'Tricks' So if people specifically want hints they can find it. making it alot easier for people to use the site and have a good read rather then scrolling through 1 post looking for the part that all these are placed in. Up the top with

Home
About Us
Contact Us
Guides/Tips/Tricks
Multiplayer Gameplay
Privacy Policy

^^^ Make this stand out more, If someone is Interwebs retarded they'll never find this shi-

Damn big help i will remember to change accordingly

yaz_rulz
01-12-2012, 04:03 AM
The font size of the stuff on the side could be smaller..

The main content looks a bit narrow.. Make it wider..

Pakoe
01-12-2012, 04:04 AM
Looking solid, thick & tight etc.

stefano445
01-12-2012, 04:57 AM
Theme by 偶爱偶家 & schiy

dat you OP?

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-13-2012, 01:54 PM
Looking solid, thick & tight etc.

mirin

The Big Sleep
01-13-2012, 02:26 PM
I dig it man, clean and simple to navigate, good stuff.

Ryanl412
01-14-2012, 12:26 PM
Bump

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-16-2012, 05:33 PM
Bump

Thump

Nostalgiac
01-16-2012, 05:41 PM
Needs a banner at the top - is a bit too plain at the moment, a banner would make it more rememberable. :)

smbrown3706
01-16-2012, 05:42 PM
source code is clean and easy to read

lerevoltingblob
01-16-2012, 05:52 PM
checked it out to click an ad. never saw any

Lilluda_5
01-16-2012, 05:59 PM
OP gonna get the google ban hammer for asking people to click his ads

TripleBeam
01-16-2012, 07:43 PM
OP gonna get the google ban hammer for asking people to click his ads

this. op how long did it take you to make this?

ridingabicycle
01-17-2012, 02:35 AM
looks extremely generic

would give you 1.5/10

brianmt
01-17-2012, 02:43 AM
Clean but generic. Clicked your add :)

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-17-2012, 06:29 PM
Hey guys, please take a look at my website and give some criticism to it so that i can improve it, i gain some revenaue off of it via advertisements so i kinda want this website to blow up so i can make some cash off of it, anyone give me some constructive criticism on what i should add to improve it and i will rep you

http://battlefieldstrategyplays.com/

EDIT: Maybe click an add so i can earn some revenue?

Made a logo, and it took a pretty decent amount of time(5 hours)

Tell me how you think it would work on the website!

Edit: Logo spells out "FGaming"

http://i.imgur.com/beneX.png

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-18-2012, 03:37 AM
Updated the logo, You guys like it better?

GrndmasGetMeHrd
01-23-2012, 04:56 PM
http://terrariahelp.com/

New site

Tell me how you guys think of this one

And maybe click an ad to earn some $$